Well, part three of “Instruction” continues to move along, though without a real strong framework…I’ve got scenes that could literally be placed anywhere. That’s not good, as far as I’m concerned–story points should be embedded in every scene so that they eventually add up.
But since this story is so nebulous, I guess I’m not surprised the story points are not evident. Oh well.
See you next month.
A Planet That Has No Sky 